Thursday, March 12, 2009

HOT POOLS

My feet were burning how can people get into those pools they're so hot.I eventialy got into the pool I got straight back out in my mind i was thinking wouldn't it be cold who cares it feels like i'm on fire i went and jumped into a colder pool.Then went onto the hydroslides they can be really painful in the dark hydrslide because you can't see the sides so when you turn a corner bang you've just hit it. In the childrens pool something was hitting me it was water where was it coming from "Tom" he was spraing me with the water shotter COME COME COME AND HIDE IN ME where was that sound coming from the "CAVE" I swam and hid in it.


by Carmie

1 comment:

Paul Sibson said...

Hi Carmie,

I love the way your post grows!

:-)

Mr Sibson